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Wednesday, 15 November 2017

Narrative


Once upon a time. As I walk out of my house I see the sunlight on the top of the sky Blooming out of nowhere. Then suddenly something shining was staking out of the tree. And the green grass felt spiky. The tree was so high that it was bigger than a tower that you will have to Climb the stairs. and the path way was so long Then I went back to the house and  I saw a picture of someone that no one ever knew of and it was so scary with there being blood. I almost felt like I was going to faint. then after awhile I woke up and I was in a house In a  room A noiz begged so I went down stairs  and I saw A Washing machine with blood staking out of the machine. I was so

Friday, 20 October 2017

Immersion Assembly


Immersion Assembly
writinby creating some exciting recounts about our immersion assembly!
WALT: plan for our writing

When we plan, we need to think about:
  • Who our audience is.
  • How we are going hook this audience in - how are we going to capture their attention in a creative way?
  • How we are going to create a description of the event which makes our audience feel like they were at the event too.
  • How we are going to keep our audience interested as they read.

Step 1: Brainstorm.
What you could include:
  • Descriptive words
  • Ideas for a hook
  • Key things you can remember from the assembly
    • What you enjoyed
    • What made you laugh

Step 2: Plan your own recount (double click on the drawing below).

Step 3: Write your recount!
Transition Words
Past tense
First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Immersion Assembly!

E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.
When you are ready to post on your blog, use the pictures in our Pav Media Folder.

On a sunny beautiful morning we went to the hall because it was  the first day  back from  the Holidays and I saw the Teachers wearing some Funky hair. Team 1 played a game of snap and they  were also acting to different  songs  and dancing  well  they were cleaning up. Team 2 did a song about  the lions in the Jungle and they sang  fast. Team 3  was doing things that  was all about  music. Next was  team 4s when they went in the car.  They were singing and it was Funny when they were singing. Next was team 5 were so funny when they acted to be scared when the movie was playing and Miss T  was saying that is not a kids movie and the was called the lion king.
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Wednesday, 18 October 2017

Thursday, 28 September 2017

Wednesday, 6 September 2017

cross Country



As I sit down I felt like I was going to explode as soon the boys went I was so so nervous and scared after they  finish we were up next. As I walk up to the start line  ready to go. When the gun went we all ran cross the field and to the finish line Nature came 1st then nina came 2nd and maddi 3nd  place and I came 4th  and suama came 5th. I was proud of myself.   

Monday, 21 August 2017

Magic Number




the moon

thy amount of the moon can see. but from Earth depends on how much of it. this amount changes each day . phases of the moon depends on its position in relation to the sun and Earth.as the moon makes it  way out  we see the bright parts of the moon's surface at different angles these are called   the phases of the moon. It takes nine days to orbit.

Monday, 14 August 2017

seasons

seasons are caused changing with the sun.the Earth  travels thy amount of sunlight each place on the planet gets  every day changes slightly.this change caused the seasons. We divided the year into 4.spring summer autumn winter. Each season last 3 months. Summer being the warmest season winter being the coldest. And spring and autumn lying in between. the seasons have a lot of impact on what  happens

Friday, 11 August 2017

working as a teem.

hi this is me and my friends reading  to our class and working as a teem.

Monday, 7 August 2017

Measurement Fun

 Hi we are learning about measurement and we were using the ruler to measure different things in our classroom.