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Wednesday 31 August 2016

Winter

The rain was pouring outside. It was getting dark and the wind was making the trees move. It got windy and the sun was high in the sky heating up.
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  1. Ms Nalder2 September 2016 at 14:21

    Hi Tahliyah,

    This is a lovely piece of writing and a beautiful picture! I really like the part of your story that says the "sun was high in the sky heating up."

    From Miss Nalder and Angelica

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  2. Ms Nalder2 September 2016 at 14:21

    Hi Tahliyah,

    This is a lovely piece of writing and a beautiful picture! I really like the part of your story that says the "sun was high in the sky heating up."

    From Miss Nalder and Angelica

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  3. Samantha (mum)2 September 2016 at 17:16

    I love all the Maori detail you put into this picture.

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