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Wednesday 7 September 2016

Princess Belle

 It was a stormy day. There was a princess called Belle. Her Father's name was Suade. They lived at the beach. One day he had to go to a contest but suade went the wrong way. Then he went inside the haunted house. Suade got sick. Then he heard a voice in the room. It was a talking candle. Suade was so frightened that he ran back to his daughter Belle and never went to the haunted house again.


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  1. Anonymous13 September 2016 at 10:34

    Hi Tahliyah,

    What a great piece of writing! It reminds me of The Beauty and the Beast with the talking candle. How did Suade get sick? I bet it was really scary to hear a candle start talking. I really like how you have used some descriptive words like 'stormy' to make your story more interesting.

    Thanks for sharing your learning.

    James

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